Through smog-speckled glass panes and walls, solid, impersonal, as stamps of concrete power, stale air pushes through the tunnels of the underground like the sickly breath of angry, wandering spirits. Below, snaked pipes hum and voices press the compressed, rigid atmosphere, tense enough to set alight; there is not a flicker of fire, light, life in the eyes of those who pass through. Mechanical and disinterested in the rest of world – minds, eyes, bodies set on their destinations.
The tube is a crossing point for thousands of self-interested lives, entwined for those petty, precious moments they are physically forced to acknowledge the existence of others’, realising where they are and look in the eyes of those whom they are face to face with on that minute ride to Leicester square. Petty, precious moments.
WIP ~ a small fragment of writing from the beginning of a story that I’m currently writing, except it begins in first person. I’m particularly interested in the psychology and morality of humans and their motives for actions, whether they be bad or good, and I hope to explore that aspect. I’m just experimenting. I’m extremely self-conscious and closed about my writing, especially my actual stories.
Amazing, good luck. Look forward to hearing more about it. I enjoyed this read! Have a great day
Cheers!
Thank you so much! I hope to post more if my self-consciousness doesn’t get the better of me haha, have a wonderful day
You’re welcome
Never give up on your dreams! Writing is a beautiful escape too! I can’t wait to read more from you
Thank you! I wish only the same for you
Ahhhh you’ve just made my day
Good luck with your aspirations! May I say that your blog is wonderfully fantastical! As is your writing, which I also look forward to reading
Awh happy to hear that! I hope you have a fantastic day none the less
Oh you’re so sweet, thank you for those lovely words
I appreciate it, truly. I love to know that other awesome bloggers like yourself enjoy what you see or read.
I hope you continue to enjoy anything you read, thank you again for the kind words regarding my writing, the same to you!
This is beautiful and compelling. I would love to read more excerpts from your book in the future!
Thank you so much, Ursa
I’m really pleased that you liked it, and I am definitely considering posting more excepts of my writing in the future!